Could you rate my poem, please?

It sounds like you have two or three poems mixed together to entice the reader to focus on your main idea (fury). If I were you I would not use so many big words such as Innocuous (harmless) in my poems but keep it simple for everyone to read and enjoy unless of course you are writing for a particular audience. Overall it seems like you are on your way to becoming a good poet and I commend you for your effort so therefore I give the poem a 5.